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Quietly Naked In The Pouring Rain, By Deacon Barry

Our winning entry is dark and vicious and wonderfully evocative. It’s a gem of a poem.

Deacon Barry

Quietly, naked in the pouring rain
I’m waiting as you frantically explain
To your angry husband, waving in the air
Those crumpled jeans you sought to hide in vain.

His sharp demands, accusing stare
Your evasions, sobbed despair
How long did this deception last?
This sick, despicable affair?

Your lover’s breaths are faint and fast
And now your time with him is passed.
Your husband screams like one insane
And from his hand his ring is cast.

Your lover knows no more of pain.
His opened throat – a crimson drain.
I clean my blade and watch him die
Quietly naked in the pouring rain.

(Email me your guest post, Deacon Barry.)

Filed under: Literature, Poetry, Poetry Contests

4 Responses

  1. Deacon Barry says:

    My thanks to all those who voted for this poem. And now JanieBelle’s got another competition up based on this poem. Booyah! Now I’ve got to sit down and compose a guest post AND a sequel. Busy weekend ahead.

  2. JanieBelle says:

    Congratulations, Deacon Barry!

    Kisses,
    JanieBelle

  3. […] Poetry, Guest Post by Deacon Barry Back a while ago, Deacon Barry won his second poetry contest here at UDoJ, and for his troubles he gets the opportunity to present a guest post, without edit, and on any […]

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